And it starts.
a stabbing, tearing ache
a little to the left
if only ignorance
worked
but asirin might be better
but it might be too good
at least last time
it almost worked
if I had been stronger
if I had been more determined
maybe it wouldn't hurt
too bad I know better
everything I want is for you
everything for your happiness
you can have anything
just ask for it
I can't read your mind, but
I sometimes wish I could
just to know
how to better love you
the pain of my madness
the longing for death
is nothing in comparison
to my longing for our life
and what is left without you
and I never want to find out
I fear to know too well
and I won't survive without you
can I hold you close to me
can I have my last words
one more time
I love you
And I won't let it end.
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Comments
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Good write!
I read and re-read this piece and after I was finished, I could only sigh. I am speechless. I hope my applaudes are enough...
its rally sad poem
it's all amazing!
Great write
and thanks so much for sharing this poem.
Glenn
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