Close your eyes my little one,
Mr.Ping is a puking dandy.
He could not hold his liquor,
with his stomach full of candy.
Pete and I tried to persuade him,
to take it slow all night.
We both knew he was in trouble,
so we changed his Bud to lite.
He started singing the pumpkin song...
"Five little pumpkins sitting on the fence"
Lost his balance on the stairs,
and now all his cookies are spent!
Let this be a lesson my son,
of the Pumpkin Puking Ping...
when eating all your Halloween treats,
liquor don't mix with such things!
Author notes
The puking pumpkin looks Chinese to me therefore the name...Mr.Ping!
A contest entry
- Puking Pumpkin PIC Prompt by BluesMan.
525 points, ended November 5, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good rhyme and flow and good humor Thank you for entering my contest
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Thanks much! Great pic to have fun with...you sure did get alot of wonderful poems!
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lol lol lol this is extreemly funny and perfect for the picture whats even more amazing is that you manage to mix good rhyme and rhythm with such good humur, it really cheered me up thanks for sharing littlefishone
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Thanks for the nice comment
What a picture on this contest!
The moral to this poem was "don't drink and eat candy!" HA! ha!
Thanks again
darlintlc
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Wise words! A funny story with a moral, very clever and told perfectly. Great fun write!
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Yeah I am a Wise ole girl! Great pic on this one!
Thanks for commenting and glad u enjoyed it
darlintlc
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Very good advice for the, up and coming.
Best wishes in the contest.
Don
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Yeah got to slip in alittle lesson for the kiddies!
Thanks for commenting and the good wishes you too!
darlintlc
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