Let me tell you a story about a world you thought you knew,
Somewhere between heaven and hell your nightmares will come true,
Listen to my storys they will make your blood run cold,
So take a deep breath and open your eyes to the darkness I behold,
Walk alone in this darkened shadow,with a tear running down you face,
So stand still and let time run by, for your feelings I will encase
You shall feel no pain, no hurt, as I own your soul,
I will weclome you to the spirt side, with a scroll to unroll.
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i did this in like 5 minutes so sorri if it sucks, the rest of my poems do but huh i carnt help that
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ya did this in 5 min ? n it does NOT sucks ! its grate an was good to read too,
RF
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hey that is so good i like that when you write its not like some poser writing from the out side you actually know what you are tlking about
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very chilling. i love this one it really hits you in the heart. great job
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well done! this poem is very good it flows rhythmically in a way that gives you goosebumps
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this one is great..
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