Autumn leaves
abandon freely
swirling in colors amidst
the silence
heartfelt thoughts,
heard faintly
as distance grows between
our love~
Author notes
Prompt: 20 words: Whispers in the wind
A contest entry
- Twenty 20 by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 4, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wistful and sad, gorgeous
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Thank you Sweet Lady
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Wonderful. a sad tale but fits the prompt perfectly... written as always with your ease of beauty
congrats on the silver chalice
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Nice twenty words, Perfect fits to the prompt. congratulations on silver.
~Sonja~
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Thank you so very much Sonja for the beautiful comment and congratulations too
Linda
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Ahhh sad thoughts of lost love. September does bring changes whether we are ready or not. I used to look forward, as the leaves took on colors and fell from the trees. Exciting times for me.
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I can sense deep sadness in this piece, oustanding imagery - I could see a lover still dear to heart fading further from view with each flutter from the falling leaf until there's nothing but the leaf on the ground. amazing write.
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Thank you so very much Scott for the lovely award in your contest! A very inspiring one indeed!!
I am so delighted you enjoyed it so!
Thank you
Jazzy
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A most beautiful whisper-straight from the heart-
Hilly xxx
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This is a beautifully crafted write, my friend.
A touch of sadness has been related with the augment of autumn.
Good luck in the contest.
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Sort of brings a little sadness to the autumn month, but still sweet as ever. A wonderful write, my friend!
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A bit of sadness and a feeling of lonely, but beautiful words. Words I relate well with. Wonderfully done and best of luck!
Linda
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I am left with a chill of loneliness...definitely a whisper that would tear at the heart, and fits the coolness of autumn.
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