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A Ornament's Memory

We're ornaments on Christmas
full of memories passed,
on a count-down...
We'll be separated
from years of High School past.
Friends long Good-byes
and tearing sorrow
parish, into new friends ahead.
In dreams beyond hindrance
to wishful hopes, inside friendship
always holding truthful happiness.

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  • Wall Door Salad
    October 6, 2008

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    i like this one alot. nice write and i love the symbolism of the christmans tree.
    "Friends long Good-byes
    and tearing sorrow"
    those are really good lines