We're ornaments on Christmas
full of memories passed,
on a count-down...
We'll be separated
from years of High School past.
Friends long Good-byes
and tearing sorrow
parish, into new friends ahead.
In dreams beyond hindrance
to wishful hopes, inside friendship
always holding truthful happiness.
A contest entry
- Just Friends: Thanks For The Memories by Wall Door Salad.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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i like this one alot. nice write and i love the symbolism of the christmans tree.
"Friends long Good-byes
and tearing sorrow"
those are really good lines

