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Darkness

Darkness envelopes me
as night sets in
Ebony shadows float over me
slightest noises invoke my imagination
Impossible beings I can soon see
clear as day in the abyss of darkness

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Prompt: "Seeing Through Sound"

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Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    Things the go bump in the night...makes me want to hide under the covers...eerie...
    thank you for entering...
    mystic


    • buffsab99
      October 8, 2008
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      Thank you

      Not my best work but this was a fun one to write Hope you are not too scared hun


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Those eerie sounds we hear can certainly drag us to darkness!! Great write hun!!


    • buffsab99
      October 4, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you hun Not sure how close to the prompt I am with this one but it made me think of how the imagination works when you are alone in the dark