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Toxic Jubilee

Dynamic buoyant excursion, jostling jubilee
distingushed stipulation furnished by loving vows,
divine discerning twinkles in memento's spectrum-
a honeymoon's intoxication.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    interesting take on the prompt and showcases a vast vocabulary range, nice alliteration. perhaps though the phrasing in the first three lines detracts a little from the simplistic beauty of the closing line.