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Goddess of the Dark Dragon

you
for
there
she waits
in the empty night
So cold and mystical
Shadows cover her face
the beautiful dragon goddess stands
in her hands swords so sharp and deadly rest
like the fangs of the god of beasts, the dark dragon  


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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 7, 2008

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    This reads nicely for the picture. I can grasp more reading it from the bottom upwards, but lose meaning when reading it straight forward. Still good work.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • CoundessaScarlotti
    October 4, 2008
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    Absolutely love the word scheme and choice. The visual images are really great!
    Good luck.