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Candy Coated Love

Sugar coated candy

Pursed on my lips

Colour shaped love

Worn as a neckless

Vibrant as it glistens

In open splendour

Lovers sharing passion

Sweet and tender

Anxiously waiting

For more of your rush

A sweet tooth of mine

Your candy coated love

 

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  • myrataal silver member
    October 12, 2008
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    Beautiful Silver here ...

    Congratulations!
    Love
    Myra


  • ZachP
    October 12, 2008
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    Beautiful and sweet
    yet passionate and hinting at a bit of a sugar rush.
    Well done, good luck.

  • dx d by me
    October 3, 2008

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    Another nice take on a photo prompt, demure enough to keep it calm. enough innuendo to make it interesting. Nicely written! Geo


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Nice work again on this Katey! Great to see you are writing once again. It was sweet to read this work of yours. THANKS!

    • Scrunter
      October 3, 2008
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      Thanks Pat. It feels good to be back. Hope all is well with you.
      Katey

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