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let me see, what do i need

martini,
trustworthy men,
more inspiration,
a home,
while being

free

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  • love-kills-slowly
    October 17, 2008
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    i like the message this sends across very good write


  • Erica Carnea
    October 13, 2008
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    short and sweet,, like it alot
    love always
    erica
    xx


  • MD Masroor
    October 10, 2008
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    Creative and straightforward. Amusing and fun! Keep it up!


  • Lavender Butterfly
    October 3, 2008
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    Creatively drawn... x


  • psychedelichippie
    October 3, 2008
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    great

    great...

    peace and love,

    jake


  • Wild Flowers
    October 3, 2008
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    that`s what we all want.....brief and to the point


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 3, 2008

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    minus the martini and the men, i could go for some of that myself, a truth in ten words, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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