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The Waiting


Butterflies lead vision,
heat of reach, I sigh

....his touch


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Prompt: "What I Want" in 10 Words

A contest entry

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  • Confusedboy
    December 9, 2008
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    softly your words float like the butterfly.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 3, 2008
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    Beautifully expressed... x


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Wow, simple and stunning, you pushed the right button to make the violins play in my heart. Best to you in the contest


  • Deathless1
    October 3, 2008
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    you got this one in the bag.
    you just told all in ten words.

    great write.