I never told you how I truely felt inside
My heart aches for your touch but it it bare
I remember the last time I layed my head on your chest
You said those 3 words that broke my heart in the end
My world collapsed when I said good-bye
Why do I put myself through such torture?
Your touch brought so much warmth into my soul
But now, I just feel emptiness that I cannot bear it
My soul is a empty shell waiting for you
My body is a collage of lasting scars
And my mind keeps replaying that night
I guess I'll just sit here and keep wishing
Waiting...
For you
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry Lovers by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wut u think?
Comments
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This is very sad, nice read. Good luck in the contest
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Thank You For Entering
Hi there. I really like your poem as it is just dark enough to grab my attention and your wording are of good choice. the way you wrote this really made me feel the wounds that your heart opens into this poem. any ways over all this is a good poem and a great first entry for my contest. thank you for entering and good luck
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