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[ The thing that lives inside me ]

The thing that lives inside me
guides me to that place I have no knowledge of.
No words of widsom to speak of
and yet it knows the way, the places to go.
It can tell which way is right...which is wrong
and can show me the deepest feelings of a heart
by one simple touch.
The next time I try to fly, I will fall
and I know this, and so does it.
So it stears me away from harms edge and takes me
to that place where no whispers are spoken
and into light is drawn breath from its heart.
Follow that path, it whispers in my ear
follow that one, it will take you where you want to go.
Away from evil and onto the path to withdrawal
It is not an option for it, so it stears
My life is but one big path, and yet it winds
on and on and I am stuck, so it helps.
And it is what it wants to be
It is free!

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  • Grey.Area.
    October 5
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    I like this one alot. Good story to it, a good read, so I cant complain really lol


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    Ah..I like the gist of the story you have refered to make understand the life and its meaning..well done..and thank you so much for a wonderful write and entering my contest..

  • Judith Chandler
    October 3, 2008

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    You're very lucky if you always get steered away form harm's edge because it's extremely painful and uncomfortable when you don't allow that steering to happen.