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Unattainable

Whispers in the wind echo from the past—
Everything we had that couldn’t last
has culminated across the winding vast.

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10.03.08
Vaughn.

Prompt:
Whispers in the wind.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    clever use of rhyme, though not necessary it actually added impact to this piece.


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008
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    nicely written, the rhyme flowed well
    good luck