The flesh begins to itch,
As fear comes rushin in.
Hazel eyes twitch,
Releasing such tortured sin.
Veins of crystal shatter,
As does my heart and soul.
Tiny pieces scatter,
As I rip flesh from bone.
Memories corrupt my mind,
Vomit stains these teeth.
A noose begins to bind,
As I lay trapped beneath.
No control, no escape,
Reality fades to rust.
Maybe I'm just to late,
Maybe faith is not enough.
Tried to save a fallen angel,
Repair her broken wings.
But I am just unable,
To bring back the song she sings.
Author notes
about me and how i was loosing control
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry Lovers by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 15, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is sad...good wording but you BETTER NOT be doing that shit again!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!
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Nice rhyming and flow. I like a lot of the imagery you have in place here. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thank You For Entering
I love this rhythm and flow through out this poem. I really enjoyed the over all concept to this poem. what I also really like about your poem here is your incredibly word useage and how you fit each and every word into the perfect sentences. any ways just all round a really beautifully penned poem and good luck -
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thanks hun, i tried lol
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