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Red

There is nothing

more

    satisfying  than

imagining              you

sucking

            me

in and out,
out and in,
all over,
in sin.

Must it be a sin?
Must such pleasure be recanted and written into the book as an evil act?

Do you know who you are?
Why do you get pleasure from eating other people's pleasure, and then regurgitating your stupid verse?

Do you know who you are?
You are the people that monogram your underwear and tube socks.
You are the people that wear chastity belts in your brain.

You hear me sucka, get a life. You have no purpose here.

Does anybody get this?

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