At last
I have welcomed Death -
Freed from a life
of involuntary
captivity
In a list
A contest entry
- brilliance please by Aussie Gypsy.
650 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It is definately involuntary for sure, I love the interpretation you have on this prompt, well done. Best to you in the contest
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Very good. I think that this is clearly an example of the brilliance that the judge requested. Great job.
Mike
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Very strong and very tight. This is fantastic.
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Gripping final two words lock this up nice and well
Best of luck
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I think many who are captives in their bodies may feel this.. really gripping write Sue, amazingly done for only 13 words!
♥
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Excellent as always Sue......Speaks volumes with few words...Hugs..mal
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You even do happy sad superbly in 13 words!
Great Stuff
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wow this is sad and happy!!! Happy that you can be free sad that you talk about dying!!! You did an excellent job expressing yourself!! This is excellent!! I love it!!
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