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Inside out

Outside
Looking in
what do I happen to see
but an unwanted future

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    This is so sad, to see future in such a way when in fact it is bright, best to you in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008
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    Indeed it is an unwanted future for everyone I think
    Powerfully penned

    Best of luck