Ten bland ideas caress void, perpetually
windmills enlighten elements, merit brotherhood
educated infinitely in cosmos winds, join
disturb the politician and disquiet silence,
aggravated within tunnels of words predestine,
blend union, sweeping us from lesser means,
unrestricted by equal rights, sculptured inside culture
a Trojan Horse will prevail, the revolution dreamed.
A contest entry
- TIP TOP TEN by Olivias Violin.
410 points, ended October 10, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Revolution of dreams, a very nice use of title, I like the imagery all packed into this little write, it smacks of frustrations, and sparks the mentioned revolution, in dreams sweeping the nation. This has the essence of current events. Well done.
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