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Disownment

You cherished me dearly.
what happened
to make me excepted from your sight?

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  • Topnotchsy
    February 21
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    Nice write here. Short but powerful.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008
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    Aww I wanted to cry
    Sadly penned in just 13 words

    Best of luck


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008

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    great take on the prompt, sadly enough people are always left behind at times
    good luck in the contest


  • Tirrell
    October 3, 2008

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    excellent question, and use of title, on par with a lament, and full of anguish, this has such a quick thought and was perfect, and impacting.