Infirmity comes to everyone eventually
Hopefully it will come gracefully
Or end
Quickly
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http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228
A contest entry
- brilliance please by Aussie Gypsy.
650 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Isn't this how we all want it to end, quickly and painlessly, well written, best to you in the contest
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. God Bless
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Deep thoughts, very well expressed
Best of luck
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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sad but well done, we all hope to age gracefully
Some more than others
good luck
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and th kindness of your words for they are so true. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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A nice thought for the immage, I enjoyed the thoughts on what we all must eventually face, as it seems to echo in the image you've used. Nice work!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and the kindness of your remarks. Some days more than others I definitely pray for gracefulness. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann
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