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From Man to Rattler

Trickling with depression, sows wither
downward floation in vespers painstaking venom-
rattler's pray.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This seems the perfect description of depression, it strikes when people least expect, best to you in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008
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    Gosh!
    Amazing

    Best of luck


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008
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    great take on the prompt, good luck


  • Tirrell
    October 3, 2008

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    There is so much energy to this one, a very short write with a natural immage, the prey and predator. A very nice thought and immage, Well done.