Trickling with depression, sows wither
downward floation in vespers painstaking venom-
rattler's pray.
Author notes
http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228
A contest entry
- brilliance please by AutumnGypsy.
650 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This seems the perfect description of depression, it strikes when people least expect, best to you in the contest
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Gosh!
Amazing
Best of luck
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great take on the prompt, good luck

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There is so much energy to this one, a very short write with a natural immage, the prey and predator. A very nice thought and immage, Well done.






