Reluctantly,
he stepped inside
old-age home;
inquiring about
abandoned mother -
(now deceased).
Author notes
Picture Prompt.
Artist: http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228
A contest entry
- brilliance please by Aussie Gypsy.
650 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this stirs the pot of emotions...congrates on the gold
mal
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Thank you so much.
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this just blew me out of the water, to have taken such an interpretation is something I, myself would have done. Best to you in the contest
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Awesome
I don't think you could get a better take on the pic. Fine words conveying the bewilderness and degeneration of old age. Very touching write with sad overtones. You achieve so much with so little...alby
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
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Awww bitterly sad
So wonderfully penned from the picture
Best of luck
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A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice depth of feeling. Good flow and tone. Nicely penned. Best wishes in the contest.
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powerful write, good imagery
good luck
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