"Please?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"Because I don't want to."
"But I want you so bad.. You don't understand how much your body drives me insane."
"I don't care, I said no so leave it at that please."
"No."
"Yes, *name*."
"Fuck you, you dirty slut. I hear you get around, what's one more gonna hurt?"
"Listen to what you want, im not like that."
"Whatever!"
Tears well in my eyes.
"Please, don't do this.."
"You deserve it. Just take it in you like all the others, you'll love it babe"
I push his hands away.
He grabs my pants and rips them off in one clean move.
"Yeah baby, you're gonna love it."
Silence apart from me letting more tears escape.
"I don't want to!"
"Just accept it, its going to happen."
....
You killed all of my dignity that night.
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Awww =S
horrific scene, but powerful idea to write about it
And so rawly
i liked that, and i love the build up and the dramatic ending with that strong statement 'you killed all of my dignity that night'
I really hope it's not true!!
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Wow. Frightening but powerful.
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wow
that's really all I can say about this piece. I have had this happen to me, too. I feel your pain. I am so sorry!
Shit like this should never happen, idc who you are, NO ONE deserves this, not even the creeps who did it to us. Very good job writing this piece. It really hit home and brought back memories... but I'll be alright. Keep up your great work, and keep your head up!
TwiztidMaggot
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The last line is extremely powerful. Great write.
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*huggles her* Aw this is so sad. The last line was great. Hope your ok hunny bun. I'm here for you!
~love lae
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Oh god. I remember what this was like, when the word "no" was never enough of a reason to not do that.
This poem makes me want to cry.
Hope your okay and that this isn't a true story
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this is really sad. how scary. no one better be messing with you or i'm going down there and kick'n serious ass!
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omg
thts terrible.....
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