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Sailing

To you I owe my gratitude
for changing life,
and my attitude.
You- my life preserve,
keeping me afloat
in this life that is not
the steadiest of boats.
As I tumble on these waters rough,
with peril, you never
let me brush
even so much as a cheek.
I’m ever safe and dry,
even in this darkness,
I’m always beneath your watchful eye.
What thanks and affection
can I offer to one
so based on perfection?
Alas, I’ll never know.
My heart is open, weeping
love before your feet,
for the task of my safekeeping.
May it never depreciate,
your love that I do
greatly appreciate-
for I would surely sink without you.
Waters, quick to bear down,
would see to it
that I would simply drown.

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  • teddybare gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    great imagery

    but the power dear, is inside you.. not an outward location but inside us all..
    loved the write you keep those comming ya hear?

    with great love and in unity
    ~teddybare~


  • loveisfreedom
    October 3, 2008
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    good job

    i really liked this write it a paints a picture so well


    • Meet Virginia
      October 3, 2008
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      Thanks so much for reading and for the comment! Glad you liked it.