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Providence



one day
    in eternity,
the moon
    fell silent.
darkness
    loomed,
thicker
    in light.


Author notes

picture inspired;

http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2422/925.jpg?1223031534

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    The inages in this just projected from my monitor, so powerfully written in 13 words, you captured me. Best to you in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    o.O
    What a strong imagery this created in just 13 words!
    Fantastic

    Best of luck


  • ShelleyA gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008
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    beautifully written
    Good luck in the contest


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    brilliance indeed,
    pulled together well, very sad
    God bless you my friend...

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