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To Heaven

Missing image
Life crippled in despair,
now walks in Light's grace;
soul free and loved.

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Picture Credit - http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228
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  • individuality gold member
    April 10

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    a sad piece, but a gentle take on death, no more suffering they walk in heaven's brigt light, free at last to jump and skip with the angels, if they so desire, and i am sure that after a life in a wheelchair, they would, i know i would. a good poem.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Yes, you left much to the imagination here, to end this with a question in the mind of everyone who reads it. Best to you in the contest


  • Malabu
    October 3, 2008
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    i like where this took me...and i ponder upon it
    mal


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    Hopeful and strong

    Best of luck


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008
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    wonderful poem; I enjoyed this immensely
    Good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Simply beautiful!! You captured this wonderfully hun, with the silhouette as the soul freed from the chair!


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