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Stephanie

I thought you were my best friend
The best one I've ever had
Instead I found out the truth
And what I learned was sad.

We still call each other friends
But I feel we're far apart
Though we see each other rarely
I have a broken heart.

You have made new friends
And i have made some to
We are talking less and less
And inside I'm cold and blue.

Each and every night I pray
That you will finally see
How much I want our friendship back
And how much you really mean to me.

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This was about my best friend Stephanie, we stopped talking and everything when I had to move.

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  • heartaching... it really hurts when friends drift apart... a lovely poem

  • Aw, I had to leave a lot of friends when I moved aswell, it sucks.
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    A heartfelt poem, I can tell how much you miss her.
    Great write.


  • Binary Fairy
    February 24
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    Good

    I really enjoy reading your work you pour your soul into it and it shows


  • Ice Queen
    February 5
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    Awww that's sad. I would hate to move and lose my best friend. I moved schools after elementary school and lost a few good friends, but you make new ones and it all happens for a reason. This a really good heart felt poem.


    • ForeverRenee
      February 6
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      i really miss her a lot.. we knew each other since we were about 4 or 5 years old... thanks for the comment


  • YourAddictedLover
    October 3, 2008

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    Awwww *hugs you*

    awww..that's so sad, Renee. I hate moving. Leaving your best friends behind is horrible and you will always miss them dearly. I'll never leave you and I'll always be here if you need me.

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