Abyss of loneliness
lingers in shadowed
reality,
these walls no longer
breathe love.
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A contest entry
- brilliance please by AutumnGypsy.
650 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congrates on silver
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Oh the darkness is so painfully real in this, it touched at the very heart of me today
Best to you in the contest
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So sad... gripping in so few words! Wonderful sis!
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Oh
Painfully sad and bursting with strength
Best of luck
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wow very powerful in so little words
imagery was overtaking
Thank you for sharing this
Good luck
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Damn
Your insight on picture prompts is absolutely amazing. You have a gift for looking inside and turning it out like no other poet I've read here. I am wonderfully envious of your talent and abilities. Great write...it made me remember my grandmother and the nursing home she stayed in until her death...That is how so many of them looked...brought a tear to my eye. Great great great. Thanks for sharing this.
-mandie-
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FANTASTIC!!!!!
You know, so many times sitting in my room the loneliness becoms overwhelming.
I can associate with this so well.
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this is deep ...well said i have a suggestion...
these walls*
mal
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