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Shadows

Missing image

 

 


Abyss of loneliness
lingers in shadowed
reality,

these walls no longer
breathe love.

 

 

 

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  • Malabu
    October 8, 2008
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    congrates on silver


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Oh the darkness is so painfully real in this, it touched at the very heart of me today Best to you in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    So sad... gripping in so few words! Wonderful sis!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    Oh
    Painfully sad and bursting with strength

    Best of luck


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008

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    wow very powerful in so little words
    imagery was overtaking
    Thank you for sharing this
    Good luck


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Damn

    Your insight on picture prompts is absolutely amazing. You have a gift for looking inside and turning it out like no other poet I've read here. I am wonderfully envious of your talent and abilities. Great write...it made me remember my grandmother and the nursing home she stayed in until her death...That is how so many of them looked...brought a tear to my eye. Great great great. Thanks for sharing this. -mandie-


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    FANTASTIC!!!!!

    You know, so many times sitting in my room the loneliness becoms overwhelming. I can associate with this so well.


  • Malabu
    October 3, 2008
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    this is deep ...well said i have a suggestion...

    these walls*

    mal

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