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Dweller

Agony administered rigidity immense disloyalty,
fiendish,sinister and limitless restraints on our life acquired,
in years this veiled dweller, exaggerated happiness
a legacy displaced, ruthless savagery, primary occupancy
stricken pervade bruises, in nights autumn swallow
candid beginnings complete with blood stain roses, why didn't I see?
stimulating authenticity of precise impulsiveness
evaluated in a degree, objected by elders within,
hours clocked by the haven,in a chilled desolate venture
brazen and lewd his charm, is only to evils bestowed,
a temple of harsh pretext horrifying inadequacies,
shrivel emotions, cringe at altar's dagger blade piercing,
shriek the howl of coyotes, packs tremble and avoid for-
mince and grated wife number thirteen am I,
just a blood pie covered by lies and leches, sucking and badgering,
shrill is the silence evaded, as I now crystallize in stomach lining
snare and snide, rising again in civil love arms,haunting his kingdom

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 3, 2008
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    Thank You For Entering

    This is a really wickedly well penned poem here. I love this in a different way from the other entries I have seen. everyone has a different take and this one from you is alot different than what I expected but its a good thing any ways this is a well penned well worded poem and I liked the concept through out this poem. any ways good luck