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I'm not awake

this is me,
i am man,
here i am,
no place to go,
at four am,
i'm no fool,
i must sleep,
but i can't,
got to sleep,
my head must stop thinking,
but it won't,
i need my sleep,
give me a chance...

why must my eyes still be open...

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