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emptiness

empty moments
cold, detached
silences deafen
echos of  past
shattered minds
broken dreams

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credit : http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is such a sad piece, I could feel the emotion so well, you brought the picture to life. Best to you in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008
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    Sharply expressed in just 13 words

    Best of luck


  • ShelleyA gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Very good depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Canadamomma
    October 3, 2008
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    great take on the prompt, good word usage
    good luck