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His days were all happy,
His days were all sad;
His days were all fleeting
Illusions he had.

The dust is all settled,
The dust lies all cold;
The dusts are now waiting
For a meeting foretold.

His dreams are all finished,
His dream is all done;
His life has now ended,
His life has begun.

Forever he'll rejoice then,
And forever he'll mourn;
The blanks and the fillings
Of the days that are gone...

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Line 7 is intentional

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  • Poetess12
    October 4, 2008
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    This poem is good. I like the rhyme and flow of it.

    Thanks for your entry.