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Reborn



you can
close your eyes
to reality

place hands
on ears
unwilling
to listen

keep a mouth
shut unable
to express

but with a turn
of the back
the last of you
is erased

 

 




 

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Prompt-The Absence of You

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    October 13, 2008
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    Nicely done Juls. I appreciate the entry so much.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 3, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job expressing your feelings!! This is very well written!!! You did a super job!!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 3, 2008

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    These are powerful words ready to spring into action. C