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Dolly


She loved him, and
She knew he loved her, too
Could feel him love her
Sure as his guitar-contoured fingers
        touched her face
His kiss on Dolly's neck, her nose
His eyes, mocking her
Loving her
She loved him, but
        how do you say that?
I love you.
I love you, but I'm leaving
 
 
 

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  • bookaddict -SYV-
    October 5, 2008

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    The lines break just at the right places.

    Sure as his guitar-contoured fingers

    She loved him, but
    how do you say that?
    I love you.
    I love you, but I'm leaving

    Favourite lines.