I'm the girl who looks in the mirror and sees only flaws, the girl who will never see what everyone else does, because no one cares enough to tell her what they see.
A contest entry
- In one sentence by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 18 entries
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But great write
Keep up the amazing work!
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AWW!
I hope that isn't true! Everyone is beautiful in there own way!
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I don't see anything 'cause you're a number of miles beyond my sight.
But from my observations and all I've read, You're one of the best.
Keep writing. Hope you've been well. I know I disappear, but it's nothing personal. -
When I look into your mirror I see a beauty in flight, a star glowing bright, a girl who's soo right she brings me delight.....I see you!
wyatt
xoxox
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A sad but oh so true write
What I see is special to me
be the girl only you can be. -
This is such a deep sentence! It says so much! She tells herself she is not beautiful but deep down she knows she is. She just needs to hear it. Your beautiful!
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This is so beautifully sad... x
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