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The stream of flowers

Light  of the sun and the fun shines in the house black and jack.
Fairy’s pick berries with daisy’s daily.
Trees and  leaves  grow with grass to make it green  like a scene with the vines growing slow like a foe on the house of black and jack.
With the dirt that flows like it rows from the stream of water that flows and flows.

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  • PoetryPuppy
    October 4, 2008
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    thank you for your lovely poem, love Kiarna

  • alex301
    October 3, 2008

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    I REALLY LIKE IT! i like how it rhymes! it rhymes very well! its really good!!!!!!!! seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • sultan gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    This is wonderful ...

    Your poetry is taking on a voice of its own. Check 'Fairy's' and 'rows'. But, the images here are beautiful and magical.


  • pop123
    October 3, 2008
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    It seems enchanting I really like it. Good job!