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Candy Kisses

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She calls him her sugar daddy
He calls her his sweet gum drop
When they get together
The whole world starts to rock

And it’s not just the candy kisses
That makes him want to preen and crow
No one else could understand
How her sugar lips sets his soul aglow

She gives him just a little taste
That keeps him coming back for more
Then begins the games and chase
He’s got it bad a sweet tooth for sure

He found out he was diabetic
The day he turned up his toes
Most think, it was all those candy kisses
On him she had bestowed

Where ever he is I’m sure he misses
What he once lived only for
His sweet baby’s candy kisses
From the woman he truly adored

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Artist Credit: iNeedChemicalX@dA.som

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  • ZachP gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Brilliant, with a hint of sweet sadness.
    Amazingly well done. Thank you for sharing
    and the best of luck.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 12, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann