I'm following my breath
among the beautiful things that adorn the world ~
tasting the sky
in shades of December
but it's the moon
that softly sways beneath my lips
that keeps me
coming back for more
Author notes
Credit the artist: iNeedChemicalX @ dA.com
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired Contest by ZachP.
400 points, ended October 12, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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tasting the sky
in shades of December ...
brilliant
simple and beautiful.
Very nicely done.
Good luck -
You captured a while other side of this picture, great interpretation. Best to you in the contest sis
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mmmm.... this is a yummy read. I love this little lyric.
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