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Lost In Hues



October blew
November hues
in orange and yellow
upon our lives,

chilling hearts
in soft crimson
memories of your youth,

before you faded
away in the bare
winter freeze

    ~and I longed

      to find you again
      in Springs hope.

 

 

 

 

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Those feelings I sometimes feel
    the longing too..
    Beautiful hun
    How did I miss this one ! I will never know
    Best wishes
    Julie x


  • katzeyez
    October 10, 2008

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    This is pure poetry to me. My heart just stilled in pleasure as I read these words.
    Thank you so miuch for entering my first contest.
    Katz xx
    I think 'life's' should be 'lives?


  • Beret55 silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    The spring hope is always there. Even in winter..
    Nice.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 4, 2008

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    I love the idea of Spring's hope. Great take on the prompt, best of luck to you.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    I often think that falls vibrant colors prepare us for the bleakness of winter. I know as the cold months drag by I look forward to the first buds and blossoms of spring.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Another gorgeous write!

    Love the movement of this write with the seasons!!


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    Beautiful

    You always seem to capture the pure and honest essence of a prompt/piece of any kind. You are pure talent. I love reading your work. Good luck in the contest darling, You deserve it. ~mandie~


  • going nowhere
    October 2, 2008
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    what can i say... i love your writing


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Great comparison of seasons and faded love and hope for the future.

    Best Wishes
    Love
    Don

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