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I Win

Game over
I won
I wish I was
more happy about it
but it doesnt really matter
it never really did
I was dying all along
but you still wanted to play

"I won't let you win!"
it was all fun and games
for you, wasn't it
I think you forgot
we were playing
until, well
game over
I win.

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  • DarkPassion007
    October 3, 2008
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    i actually really like this poem

    Its very unique...good job

  • x26ss
    October 2, 2008
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    very lyrical