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Life of me

Life is nothing but void.
Wasteland, empty; lingers the Dark.
Inhibits any growth; nay, death.

It wasn’t that horrible; death.
It just leads you to the unknown of void
A place where you see nothing but Dark

Though they say, hope is light for the dark.
Yet hope almost non-existent to me, yet it is for death.
A certainty of doom to the oblivion void.

Summary of my life: Death, void, dark.

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hope it make sense. It's a sestina poem.

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  • x26ss
    October 2, 2008
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    holy