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Sunset Serenity

My worries fade as the moon begins to rise
Only the two of us exist in this moment
All is silent, calm
Except for the crashing of the waves
But they can't reach us,
Nothing can touch us here.

Your breathing matches mine
Our hearts share one beat
Your body and mine, entwined
Flesh to naked flesh
The sun on my back, the sand on yours
Our lips meet

I am exposed ..
Yet I have never felt so safe
As I do now
This is what dreams are made of
And If I am asleep, may I never wake
I would be content forever
Embraced by your arms
Here, In paradise

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  • SadmanJim
    March 20

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    WOW!

    Romance and tenderness drip from this, like melting snow and ice from my roof gutters. Rings very true, universal, and sexy... without being graphic.

    Write On!
    jIM