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The Cosmic Ocean

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Like a river, life flows on
With hope, it sparkles and
reflects light, like a jewel

With love, it embraces the earth
Yet looks upward with reflective
rays of adventure and discovery

In isolation the river wanders
And tries many different avenues
Often, in loneliness, it must strive

Sometimes, it meets with other
meagering rivers and forms a
bond, like a beautiful friendship

There are many directions that the River
must roam and often little waves
well up from the river’s essense

These waves often form tiny streams
that go individually their own way
always remaining  rooted in the river

On through Life, these little waves
that became streams continue to flow
deriving nourishment from the river

And these individual streams experience
many things - some wonderful, yet most
often conflicting and with turmoil

Until it reaches the ultimate goal -
The Sea - mingling and becoming
one with the Cosmic Ocean of Life

Again to branch out once more in the form
of countless Rivers, waves and little streams
Forming a multitude of bonds born again into Life

Yet, always deriving strength and
nourishment from it’s indwelling Source -
The One, All-embracing Nothingness of the Sea

 

 

 

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  • Dangerousparable silver member
    October 28, 2008
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    what a beautiful poignant effect


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    This has a beauty to it that is hard for me to describe. The feeling it gave me while reading was a happy uplifting one, you have done so well portraying this. The emotions are stunning. You breathed life into the prompt, with deep meaningful imagery. A fantastic first read of the day


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 5, 2008
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    Ah..I agree with the comments made by Pisces rainbow , this is really a piece to bring depth to the prompt..a great work indeed...


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    I am speachless
    we are the waves of the ocean and are returning to the Source.
    in unity and harmony
    exceptionally written
    amazing metaphors
    awesome write
    God bless you my friend...


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      God bless you too!

      And thank you for your nice comment on my poem "Cosmic Ocean." I have always identified with being like a river flowing from the source of the ocean and back to it. karen

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