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The seasons change[but true love does not.]

It has been 9 months today
since I met you that winter day
sobbing and crying to your ex lover
I knew from that day
I wanted to grow closer.

A simple hug to show I cared
although tears filled your eyes
and steamed through the winter air
You were so beautiful
if only I could have frozen that moment in time
I would still be there hugging you while you cried that night.

Your girlfriend wasn't the greatest of people
she drank, and said mean things
hurting you with her
you were blind sighted at the way she took advantage
your friends knew and I knew
I could treat you better than that

I wanted to be with you
and I knew you were a great person
I knew I would treat you right
and you could encourage me

two months ago we made it offical
after a struggling battle to have you for myself
because of your ex girlfriend
that day was one of the happiest moments of my life
my work had truly been payed off
as you became my one true love and I took your hand as my girlfriend.

Weeks have went by and so have the months
but seasons can change but true love can not
drama had been stired amongst some other people
but baby I wasn't mad at you
I just get cold feet here and there

I'm scared because you are perfect
my dream girl
my motivator
my smart ass
a high intellectual
I get scared at the fact that I know it is you
so young and so early in my life
with at least 70 more years to view

I think your beautiful
and in my eyes you do no wrong
I don't want to leave you
and I have wanted you there all along
so when I push you away
please push right back
it is moments like that
I am scared of the fact
that I love you.

There are many more months to come
but as the seasons change
our love will only grow strong
I want you there by my side forever and always
as my beautiful baby
my girlfriend
and my life.











Author notes

Andi----username redhanded--the pet idea is kinda new and funny and kinda cute too. LOL. so um i cud be a pet or a cuzin or smthn like that lol. great contest by the way.and this piece is a happier one of mine I usually writer darker poetry and scary stuff of the sort LOL. so I hope you enjoy. thnxx again.
Andi
(redhanded)

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  • wakawaka05
    December 18, 2008

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    What a great write babe. It has been almost 6 months now since we made it official and we are still going strong. I love you so very much


  • XxTwigxX
    October 5, 2008

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    that is a very loveing poem, i adore the love you two share, and i hope you can hold it forever.

    i hope you all the best

    Danielle~*


  • endless-lover silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    I'm scared because you are perfect
    my dream girl
    my motivator
    my smart ass
    a high intellectual
    I get scared at the fact that I know it is you


    these words just here had me!

    amazing write doll, i loved it much
    keep up your great work, and thanks for entering the contest
    i think you would be a great pet

    xox

    vanna


    • redhanded
      October 3, 2008
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      thankyou very much for your comment I really appreciate it. best of luck to you in the future and with ur contests and your writing...

      andi
      (redhanded)