I'm still an opened book
with untouched history
up to twentieth page filled
Blank chapters of my story
waits to be inked
Come and spill what you think
Give it a twist and taste of
sweetness
This story of mine continues
What title it may hold is your
decision
But be careful this is no fiction
this is no drama this is the story
of my very own life
Author notes
Give me a title lol
Please tell me what you think
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The title is perfect, no need for changing this poem is amazing I just love it. My favorite part was the whole thing.
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what should i say
you have asked me to come ap after months and i found this one in front of me
what a great poem
the name is really nice
no need to change the name
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thanks Rehan good to see you back
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Wow- great idea, very well executed. I can understand and empathise with every word here, however abtract it is.
Nice! ^^
Id X
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Beautiful poem.....how about....Journey to Autumn
Well done.
Slayer
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Thank you for reading Slayer...yeah this poem can hold the title "Journey to Autumn" but for now I would keep it like that.
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its a very beautiful take on your life. i loved it.
I like the title as it is being untitled
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thanks Abuyi for reading, its been a while since I last posted here something.Feels good to be commented
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yes it does
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I guess you already have a perfect title hmm.. Autumn Poet.. thou I prefered Poetess
Wonderful piece of poetry.
Peace
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aww thanks lonely
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