Through the looking glass,
a perfect world lays.
Through the eyes,
of such a little girl.
She sees the future,
that lays ahead of us.
A world of change,
and such beauty.
Green lush fields,
no more pollution.
Peaceful countries,
no more fighting.
No need for bombs,
or even for a gun.
Just need a smile,
and care for others.
Through the looking glass,
such a wonderful view,
of a perfect world,
and skys that shine blue.
Author notes
i will be anything you want me to be..
A contest entry
- Wanted: More AP family members by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
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i want to see a world like that!
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haha me too..
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This has a beauty in its own. I adore this poem. Thank you for entering in my contest! Good luck. You really did not know which family member you want to be huh? Well I would be honored for you to be in my family. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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any preference?
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Wonderfully Done !
A few different thing's really jump out to me in this poem ! I will start from the beginning though ! Through the eyes, Of such a little girl. She sees the future, that lies ahead of us. Peaceful countries, No more fighting.No need for bombs, Or even a gun. Just a smile, And care for others!!!!!!! Blessings Be To you Always ! And again Wonderfully worded, as well as expressed .You have done a nice job here on this poem ! Brenda Gae
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this so awesome
its getting late though, good night!
much love
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