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I Stand For You

I am not the messenger
only the being
which is more than enough
if you knew what I knew.

I vibrate for you
because you are you,
and because you are you
I stand captivated.






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  • tara wilson gold member
    February 4

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    "I vibrate for you
    because you are you,
    and because you are you
    I stand captivated."

    mymymy -- how lovely is this poem? i have felt this vibration for another, yes, what an absolutely wonderful way of putting this into words,

    beautiful


  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    I like the phonetics of this.


  • Child of Water
    October 4, 2008

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    One of the best stanza's ever written in potery history :"I vibrate for you
    because you are you
    and because you are you
    I stand captivated". Seriously? That is beyond beautiful
    Sweet and simple.
    Best wishes


  • vitamin.M
    October 4, 2008

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    fantastic...last line, phenomenal, "i vibrate for you" really really WHERE did you come up with that one?

    you are probably my favorite poet. of all time. every.

    wow...i want to write commentaries, i want to read everything you have ever written, look into the evolution of your words...


  • Heart Sutra
    October 3, 2008
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    wow! this is wonderful!

    wowza wow!


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Lovely touch of mystery here - allure as well. Loved the depth of this little piece, Jaden. A strong voice...

    ~ Nicolette

  • Rowan gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    unlucky-lucky gal. lol.

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