Kisses laced with surgery sweet goodness
As gum drops dance lines around her throat
Boys come by to taste her angelic treats
She doesn't mind their flirtatious ways
She knows one day they will all stay away
She'll still be here with her sweetest lips
And fond memories of those candied kisses
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired Contest by ZachP.
400 points, ended October 12, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice poem. I like it. Great job.
Mike
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Thank you for the very nice comment, and by the way ... how much wood would a woodchuck chuck ?
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"Boys come by to taste her angelic treats"
so very suggestive, lol. At least to me.
Well done. You've captured the prompt well.
Good luck.
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