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please promise me this.

everything in my life
felt so..cold
i felt like life was defeating me
making my past unfold

but when i looked in your eyes
and saw what i never thought i'd see
you showed me a different path
you told me you would love me

my heart became breakable
and my soul was rebuilding again
but you promised you wouldn't hurt me
and offered me your hand

do you see what your doing to me?
your building me up to break me back down
i'm scared your going to scar me
i'm scared your gonna throw me on the ground

if you truly love me
tell me everyday
keep my heart whole
and keep my soul from going away
 

i'll stand by your side
and help you through thick and thin
please just promise me one thing
please never lie to me again

Author notes

this is for ALEXANDER SINGLETON
one guy that i care for so much

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  • Larry-The-Faceless
    October 16, 2008
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    What???

    I thought you cared about me too!!!
    shows how good of a friend you are geeze

    LOL JK

    I LOVE YOU

    Larry Brandon Jett... Great job


  • Wild and On Fire
    October 10, 2008

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    I felt it was....

    Sarah that's great and I could feel the possibility of pain there but that you trust someone with your heart....It's hard to do,I know!!